Comments needed!

[angelophile]

Help me out here. I'm tinkering with a poster design for Arsenic and Old Lace and would like comments. Am I on the right track? Love it? Hate it?

Bear in mind I'm only part way through, but I'd like comments on what I can do to improve the design.

Comments

[tadiera.livejournal.com]

I'd like to see it with the red slightly faded more. Overall, I like it, but I have this feeling it'd look even better with a slightly darker / faded red.

[goddesscomplex.livejournal.com]

I like how the font in Arsenic is dripping but does the font in Old Lace need to drip, too? Is there another 'lacy' font that can be used? I love the optical illusion with the face/glass and the tri-color is simple on the eyes. Over all, I like it.

[shadow-weaver.livejournal.com]

I think it's fine myself.